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 My New Poem - its called "LOVE"

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Todd Cleary

Todd Cleary

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PostSubject: My New Poem - its called "LOVE"   Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:04 pm

Love is a strange thing
much like an octopus
It can hurt your feelings
Like your feelings are moles
poking their heads out of holes
In a 'whack-a-mole' game
Unlike an octopus
which uses its legs to eat crabs
Love can GIVE you crabs
And I guess you COULD digest them
slowly
Like an Octopus
But that's gross
and no one loves a gross person
who eats their own crabs
So I guess that love and Octopi
Are similar and different in many
Amazing respects
But one thing is for sure:
Both are full of suckers!

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Big Daddy

Big Daddy

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Registration date : 2007-01-28

PostSubject: Re: My New Poem - its called "LOVE"   Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:17 pm

todd you bore me
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Todd Cleary

Todd Cleary

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PostSubject: Re: My New Poem - its called "LOVE"   Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:19 pm

Shut up you big fat puff. You wear a womens swimming costume and a pair of Natalie Coates' boots.
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Big Daddy

Big Daddy

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PostSubject: Re: My New Poem - its called "LOVE"   Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:38 pm

Why call me fat like that? calling me fat is a blatant sign of oppression. You should respect my freedom of speech.
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gypo will

gypo will

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PostSubject: Re: My New Poem - its called "LOVE"   Thu Mar 15, 2007 1:38 am

very poor poem! a poem should stir emotions from deep in the sole this does not, and the whole point of love been like a octopus, you can link anything to anything if you try hard enough so try harder with your poems is what im saying.
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Mikey Hall

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PostSubject: Re: My New Poem - its called "LOVE"   Thu Mar 15, 2007 3:36 pm

your crack is worse than mine Todd. Poor effort really.
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